Thursday, March 31, 2011

Essay Outline

      I. Introduction
              A. Texting  while driving is dangerous because it causes accidents and even death
              B.  Studies show that people who text and drive become distracted and are more likely to crash.
                     a. MSN auto conducted a survey with results that texting while driving increases the chance of accident because of the distraction.
      II. Body Paragraphs
             A. I think that making a device in vehicles that only allows calls to be made to and from the vehicle.
             B. Police can enforce the law even more and make the fines really expensive to force drivers not to text and drive.
                   a.In some states the fine is 159 dollars but that should be increased to 300 dollars to be more of a deterrent toward texting and driving.
                   b. All 50 states need to make texting while driving illegal
            C. There are devices such as iZup, CellSaftey, and ZoomSafer that are plans to help make texting stay out of vehicles.
      III. Conclusion
             A. Restate my thesis which will be the problem and proposal.
             B. Let the reader understand that this change will have a positive impact on the lives of drivers
                  a. Saving lives is the key goal to fixing this problems and studies show such as MSN auto show that with no texting in vehicles, drivers will be more ficused on the road and automobile accidents will decrease.

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